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Review:Ron 4 Hermione says:
Hey there, this is a great story! I don't think I've read a story that focuses on how Angelina and George got together before but this is wonderfully written.

I love your characterisation of Angelina, she's so feisty but also confused over Fred still loving her and then George made a move but she was still, her, she was sad but she was still looking out for George and right at the end where they're both in the office, aw! So cute and fluffy and the last line is perfect! "Fred would have said, “What took you so long, schnookums?” Aha, he probably would have too!

I love the idea of them hiding out in the cottage, especially the fact that George wants to go because he hides from his family as he thinks he upsets them because he looks like Fred. So sad! D': I think you've got George's reactions spot on though, not just for Fred's death but for how he reacts to Angelina too!

This was a great story, going to add to my favourites! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! Ever since I wrote the little paragraph in Hormones about how they got together I've really been thinking about it. I just had to write it.

Fred totally would have said that. While being all smirky too.

I really like Angelina. She showcases her "Captain-ness" she had while in Gryffindor, but also that softer side from losing someone she really did love.

That was probably the saddest part for me to write... about his family thinking he looked like Fred. George would definitely do something like that.

Thank you so much! I really appreciate you reading it :)


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