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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
So you managed to turn Hermione into a Zabini in a way that actually worked with the story? I love it! I don't know if you were intentionally giving a nod to the infamous "Hermione Zabini" trope, but I enjoyed it either way.

Esme is adding an interesting new dimension to the story. I found her pretty insufferable at first, but she's growing on me now that we can see where she's coming from more.

Tennant did seem awfully interested in Harry's activities at the school, so it makes sense that he was the informant.

Author's Response: I wasn't really thinking of the Hermione/Zabini ship, but now that you mention it, I can see the reference. I just think of Mrs. Zabini as being the antithesis of Hermione. She's stuffy, prejudiced and all about birthright and privilege. So it was funny to put Hermione in her shoes (corset?) for a while.

Esme is a work in progress at this point in the story. I'll be really interested to see what you think of her by the end...

Tennant's role becomes clear later in the story. I'd say you're correct to be suspicious.

Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts and reactions!


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