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Review:MadiMalfoy says:
Hiya, here with your review as per requested! :)

Oooh, this is brilliant, absolutely brilliant! I love the idea that the Sorting Hat could very well be a Horcrux, although a rather unconventional and more promising one at that. I think the song was great! Definitely hinted at what had happened all those years ago between Salazar and Godric.

The way you intertwine the stories doesn't interrupt the flow whatsoever in my opinion, and really works! Your characterization of Tom was spot on, I think, and makes a lot of sense. You have a very unique writing style that I really like! The variance in sentence structure and terminology is great!

Overall, a fantastic piece so far and you should definitely continue on with this and re-request for future chapters! :) xx
~MadiMalfoy

Author's Response: Hello! :)

Aw, I'm so glad you liked this story! :) I'm pleased you enjoyed the idea of the hat being a Horcrux, which I know is a little out there. Yes, it is a rather unusual Horcrux. And I'm so glad you liked the song, haha. I actually quite enjoyed writing it, and trying to foreshadow what Riddle would later discover. :)

I'm very happy to know the stories meld well together, and doesn't seem like too much! And that Tom was well characterized, he's just such a chilling character to write.

Thank you so much for what you said about my writing style as well, that really makes me happy! :)

Ah, I actually considered doing a sequel in which we find out what happened to Gryffindor! We'll have to see if inspiration hits! :P Thank you for a lovely and thoughtful review! :D


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