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Review:rogue_bludger says:
you are evil. how could you leave me at a cliffhanger like that?! omg i cant even begin to tell you how eager i am to read the next chapter right now!
i did enjoy this chapter, though it felt a bit rushed in places. I think you were showing a time lapse before bill asked tonks about remus, but maybe put in a few words about whats going on while the time goes by? Tonks just seems straight up brilliant, and i adore her in your story. i can't wait to see whats next, and thanks so much for the shoutout!
~M

Author's Response: I'm sorry! I haven't done a cliff-hanger at all yet, so I felt the need to put one in! The next chapter's nearly done, so watch this space :P

I felt it was a little rushed too, so I'll definitely go and include the suggestions. I just hate showing time lapses because I never how much depth to go into!

I'm so glad that you like Tonks, as I love writing her! The shoutout was very much deserved as I really love your reviews :D Thanks for another brilliant one!

-Kiana


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