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Review:SiriusAura92 says:
This was a pretty good story. I liked the description of how she felt when she heard James die and how she reflected on her last moments of happiness.
You probably could have gone a bit further, maybe describe what she was thinking/feeling when she was begging for mercy but, in all, I enjoyed reading it.
Oh, and it's an 'Anti-Disapparition Jinx'. It stops people from disappearing (that's how I remember it). :)

Author's Response: thank you for reading! I actually really did want to get more into her past memories of happiness but I had to work with writing it under 500 words. Yes! That was it! I wasn't sure how else Lily couldn't have Disapparated away, unless you can't disapparate with a baby. thank you so much for reading and reviewing! (:

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