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Review:rez says:
I loved this :) that first bit, where Beth comments that James would probably have lapped up the attention of being sung happy birthday, made me want to go back to 'in the red' and see if that scene ever happened! (because alas, unfortunately I don't remember... I think one of these days I will go and reread them and drop you a line ;))

I missed Sirius here, especially since Beth was reminiscing about the time when Harry was born.. Sirius is just so adorable, even more because he's a bit of a screwup, you can't not love him!

glad I waited a while to read this cause now it will be less of a wait til monday! yay!

Author's Response: Beth is full of snarky comments for James, which really is one of my favorite aspects of her character. ♥ There actually never is a scene where they sing to James on his birthday -- but I assure you, if there was, he would have been tickled pink for it! I would be beyond flattered if you re-read ITB and/or ITR. I can't tell you how much your even considering it makes my day!

I definitely missed Sirius here, too, and if the canon letter Harry found had indicated his presence, he definitely would have been included in this chapter! Canon works against me sometimes, unfortunate as that is. He does appear in the next chapter, though, and I sincerely hope you'll pop by to see him there!

Thank you for coming back and reviewing this chapter, like always; I say this every week, but I do hope you know how much it does mean to me that you always drop by and leave your opinions. ♥ And now you really don't have long to wait at all for the next chapter! Hurray!


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