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Review:sour_grapes_snape says:
Late review is late. In my defense, this is my first time on HPFF in weeks. Life = crazy right now. But this is not the place for me to rant.

Okay. So, I loved the part where Addie finds the girl totally naked. I laughed out loud. Can you say awkward?

Hmm. This isn't supposed to sound harsh, but I guess Gus seems like a bit of a cliched character? I mean, he's only just been introduced, so there's certainly room for plenty of character development and stuff, but I guess that's just my initial impression. That may or may not change in the future and I just want you to be aware of it.

Oh, Addie. I really couldnget the sense that she wasn't taking this job seriously - and neither was James. I'm excited to see how everyone will react to this. When James left on his own I just knew things were not going to end well.

On the whole, great chapter. Loved the interaction between James and Addie. Can't wait for the next update!

Much love and fluffy kittens,

Laura

Author's Response: Considering the number of times /I've/ left you late reviews, I'm not going to say anything, although, admittedly, I waited long for your review.

That was a fun bit for me to write too. But God knows where I got such a strange idea.

Gus /is/ cliché. He is a typical sassy gay best friend, and I decided on including him because a) I don't see many sassy gay best friends on Harry Potter fanfic and b) I love him. I regret nothing. :D

Addie was careless, and she knows it herself. James' non-seriousness was only to be expected, but Addie will have some tough questions to answer when it's time for her to meet Harry.

Thanks so much for reviewing and the fluffy kittens, Laura!

Cheers,
-Akansha.

PS. The wait for August and CoB- The Movie is killing me. Not really relevant, but I felt like you'd understand. :')


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