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Review:lovethepotters says:
I love this little one-shot! Iíve always been fascinated by the character of Barty Crouch and I love the insight youíve provided into the evolution of his character. There arenít too many one-shots where you get to see Barty from his youngest days to this sentence in Azkaban, so kudos to you :)

Itís interesting how youíve portrayed Barty as a victim of circumstances. In effect, the Death Eaters provide a recognition and connectedness that his father never offered. I also love how youíve included Bartyís slow but steady disintegration of trust in his father; itís very believable.

A big congratulations to you for writing in second person. Not many people can pull it off successfully and I think youíve just done that! :)

Would you mind giving my story "A Pot of Lilies" a look when you're free? A review would be appreciated :D

Again, well done for writing such a great story! I'm going to go and read some more of your work now :D

Author's Response: Aw I'm so glad that you liked it. I never really thought about him much until I was given him for a challenge and I just wanted to explore why he turned out the way he did and it seemed to make sense to cover his life.

I'm glad that you liked it, because that's what I view most tragic about him and it saddens me to see that he could have been saved so easily, yet he wasn't.

I'm really glad that you thought I pulled it off as I had never tried it before this.

I've responded to your PM, and I can't tell you how sorry I am! I'm kind of busy at the moment but I'll check it out asap!

Thank you for this lovely review, and I would go on for longer but my PM explains it better :)

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