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Review:Lululuna says:
Tag! :)

I don't think this was a filler at all! It was great to learn about what exactly these firsts were, and more context into Scorpius' character and Rose's relationship with him.

I'm really liking Rose as a narrator, she has a sassy and believable voice which helps her seem like a real person addressing the reader. I liked her internal doubt and little asides, they made the story humorous and made me feel like I was there along with her. I thought the integration of other characters was very smooth as well: by showing Rose's notations of where her friends were in the room at the party, I got a good understanding of which Weasleys are close in age to her and who she might be close with.

Scorpius intrigues me as a character as well! I like how she doesn't all-out hate him, but they just have a sort of mutual competition. I can tell that Rose is really interested in him, even if she can't quite admit it. Her disappointment in his ignoring the kiss after was very endearing and typical teenage girl. The fact that she spent two hours thinking about him made me laugh!

Another good and entertaining chapter! :)

Author's Response: Hiya! :)

I'm glad you liked this chapter, because I kind of didn't. I'm also happy that you think I'm doing a good job of using Rose as a narrator. I really like writing, from her POV because I think it fits the light-hearted nature of this story. It makes me happy to be told that its believable and funny. Thanks for the reassurance! :)

And yes! The typical teenage heartbreak scenario. Hard to deal with and hard to forget :P Don't we know it? ;)

Scorpius, is an intersting character, I think. I'm talking about him, generally. I've always loved reading about Scorpius in every story he's in.

Anyway, thank you so much for reviewing :)

P.S I really like your work! ^_^


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