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Review:patronus_charm says:
I honestly thought Scorpius was going to bring back his mum with the beginning bit then, and then with him asking Draco whether he wanted to keep it or not. I was getting quite excited because when they used it in the book it was pretty cool, and his mumís death seems to be still effecting them so it would have been interesting to see.

Ah Scorpius and Dracoís relationship is so cute! I think itís due to their limited conversation which makes them cute. Iím not even sure why. It was just the way Scorpius silently observed his dad and saw that he was overworked and he cared for him even though he didnít say it and it filled me with fuzzy feelings.

I didnít think Draco would be able to cast a patronus, Iím not sure why but I think it may be a little bias creeping in due to him being a Death Eater at one point. Iím not really sure what to make about Albus and Floraís patronuses either, but Iíll just choose to ignore the whole predator/prey thing going on.

I liked the throwing the stone away scene, as it was really cute when Draco congratulated Scorpius. Ah I donít think Iíve ever called Draco cute before, what have you done to me? :O I guess itís mainly because in Welcome to Blunderland I didnít get the impression those two had a good relationship but seeing it here shows that they sort of do.

Bahaha! Scorpius went to his dad for help with romance problems? I cracked up far too much at that one. I think it was this line ĎHe shakes his head. ĎUnbelievable.íĎ which is what really made it! I do hope Lucy does forgive him as I never really expected them to be together, but now they are they just fit really well.

Another amazing chapter ♥

-Kiana

Author's Response: Ah, it's interesting that you thought that! I didn't plan for Scorpius to bring his mum back in any of the drafts in this fic - from what it says in the books, it sounds like those who're brought back from the dead solely by the Resurrection Stone are more like ghosts than anything, and I think Scorpius and Draco would know that and thus decide not to bring Astoria back. The exception in Scorpius' case is that the turning of the stone coincided with, essentially, the magical application of a defibrillator, and as in some cases of hypothermia actual brain death comes /after/ clinical death, the two coincided a little too neatly. God, I need to get out more...

No, I didn't think Draco could cast a patronus either, and I think JKR might have said something about Death Eaters being incapable of patronus casting - I know Draco's not /evil/, but he doesn't really have the willpower or the ~goodness~ within. Also, oh my god, that thing about Albus and Flora's patronuses was meant to be an inside joke - I totally forgot to delete it when I proofread, I'll be sure to go back and take it out now!

Lucy turns up again very soon, so watch this space!

Thank you for reviewing :3 ♥


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