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Review:missclaire17 says:
This is Claire, again. I figured that since I left reviews for two of your chapters, I might as well leave one for the last chapter you have up. (:

I definitely will not let Snape's point of view color my views on Tobias, but I'm very curious to see how things will work out that it will be a shred similar to the dark view that Snape had of his parents.

Tobias's quietness (and almost mysteriousness) paired with his bluntness does remind me slightly of Snape himself, so I can see that he inherited things from his father other than just black eyes.

It was rather funny, how Tobias started choking up because Eileen asked how his trousers were. It's like the start of this mini inside joke between the two of them.

Something that I do want to commend you about is the way that you manage to describe the setting of your story in such a perfect way. You don't use a monologue of describing what it's like, but somehow, I can see a perfect picture of it forming in my head thanks to the little details like Lorraine's outfit transformation, the type of people who applied to be Eileen's assistant, etc.

This has been a pleasure to read! I will continue to be keeping myself updated with future chapters!(:

Author's Response: Hello again Claire! Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing all of the chapters so far (it reminds me that I must get back to yours!).

I simply don't want my readers to think that Eileen & Tobias had a terrible time the entire marriage, you know? She was a pureblooded witch and obviously loved him very much at one point or she would have married someone magical. At least, that's what I think. It is definitely going to get dark and you guys will see how their relationship progresses to how Severus sees it.

I'm so glad that you thought Tobias was a bit like Severus! So perceptive! Not many of my readers have noticed that yet. I want Tobias to be his own person, but I want readers to also recognize that they are related.

Haha, I'm super stoked you thought that was funny! I think it's hilarious! It will come up now and again, you can be sure. Inside jokes are the best.

Thank you so much! I try to use every word purposefully, both with description and dialogue. I love to know that my readers enjoy it.

THANK YOU SO MUCH for the amazing reviews! I really appreciate it and simply can't wait to see what you think of upcoming chapters! ♥

Shelby


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