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Review:missclaire17 says:
Hello! This is Claire, here with a review for the Gryffie June Review Exchange.

I really liked how you started this chapter out; the descriptions of Penelope giving birth was very vivid and I could really imagine the pain that she was in and the sort of situation she was forced to give birth in.

Also, the bit about Penelope being magical and how she used her last dying breath to attempt to write a letter to her son to try to explain really made it real that magic in those times were a horrible superstition and to be known as a witch! And the fact that she wrote a curse; I like how so far we are unsure what that curse specifically is. Is it the curse of being magical, or is it something more?

A very interesting beginning so far, and I will be reading more! This is a wonderful story.

Author's Response: Hello Claire! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

I'm really stoked you liked the chapter and how I began the story! I try to craft everything with much intention and purpose.

That part made me so sad when I was writing it. I think I'm way to emotionally involved in my writing, haha! I can't tell you about the curse, but it will all come to light as you get further into the story! It will be good, promise!

Thank you so much for the wonderful review! I appreciate it so much! :)

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