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Review:TheSortingHat says:
I knew it! I knew it! I KNEW IT!!! *HAPPY DANCE*

So yeah. I knew that the baby wasn't Scorpius'. I am a genius. Everyone should fall down in awe.

Okay. Now that I've taken care of that- this chapter is really quite well written. I'm really enjoying the character development with Rose, and the interesting and differing dynamics between her and each of the Potters. I suspect that the father is Castor (although it's possible I have a bias in just not wanting it to be Pollux), and I think that Will likes Rose, although we'll see if my predictions are right! :)

One thing I would critique is that I'd like more layers for Faye; I really feel like she's lacking dimension. She has very few traits, and I'd like her to acquire more depth as the story continues.

I honestly have no grammar or writing style critiques for this review (which is odd for me, but whatever), so just... really good job! Lovely cliffhanger, can't wait to see what's going on Andrius, and get the next chapter up quickly!

Author's Response: Hello TheSortingHat,

Well done! You dance away while we fall at your feet!

Thank you! Rose has got a way to go yet but I'm glad you like it so far. I don't know if you've read the next chapter but you find out who the father is at the beginning of it. I'm curious as to why you don't want it to be Pollux...? He will definitely be featuring later on in the story and might even get his own spin off. We'll see. As for de William you will just have to keep reading.

Faye is quite shallow at the moment but we get to hear more about her in the future. She has some secrets of her own, not just her pregnancy. I'm working on it, thanks for pointing it our though!

Thank you so much! Chapter Twelve is yo and I've just added Chapter Thirteen to the queue so it should be up in the next few days.

Thanks again for taking the time to review and I really hope to see you around again,

Irish Myth.


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