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Review:kaneswaran says:
I am absolutely in love with this story! Usually I look for stories centered around James II or Albus, but I cam across yours and, after the first few lines in chapter one, couldn't stop reading.

I like the unique setting you give the story. You have them in the muggle world and I haven't read many stories where that happens (which is ridiculous because I think it makes for a great story). At first I thought that Louis was going to be an arse throughout the whole story, but then I kept reading and now I'm in love with him... Oh.

One thing that irks me about Ava is that she can't see that Louis is in love with her and she keeps flip-flopping between actually seeing Louis as himself and mistaking him for Ian. >.< I just want them to love each other. Sigh.

But this is a great story! You've written it very, very well and I'm excited for a new update! (:

Author's Response: Awww, thank yooouuu ♥ I too also love James or Albus stories, but I really wanted to write one that was different from my others. I'm glad you like reading it as much as I like writing it!

Ahaha, yeah, I thought it would be cool to put it in the Muggle world. Again, trying to make this stand out a bit. Isn't it funny how he's slowly changed from an annoying person to someone you're in love with? It's almost like the author planned that...

Well, technically, he's /not/ in love with her (yet). :P And she is trying to see him for himself now - at the beginning she did flipflop, but she's making a conscious effort not to do that anymore.

Thank you so much! The next update will be coming fairly soon :)

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