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Review:MargaretLane says:
Love the ring. It makes sense the Aurors would have something to alert them like that.

I also think you write the jargon of the Aurors and the Department of Law Enforcement well. I like the way you portray Hermione at work. She seems very much in control, which I would expect her to be.

And of course, it makes sense that if she needs an Auror to protect her, it should be her husband. Will be interesting to see them working together.

I like the fact that this is showing a common theme in Next Generation fics from a side we don't often see. I've read a few Next Generation stories where Death Eaters or their children or supporters are trying to get revenge by targeting the children of the Trio and usually it's from the kids' point of view, whereas here we have the adults worrying about the possibility of the kids being targeted.

I've a feeling I should be able to figure out who this woman is. I also suspect the name is an anagram, but I might be wrong about that. I'm going to try playing around with it and see if I get anything.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

It was fun creating the ring, the globe and the new security protections for Hogwarts. :)

Thank you! I expect that there will be sparks as Ron and Hermione work together. Especially since Ron will be trying to keep Hermione safe and Hermione is wanting to solve the mystery. :)

The woman has been identified in this chapter. I think saying anything else would give it away... :I

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!


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