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Review:Serendipity1234 says:
They are so cute together. Even though they're both so sad and screwed up right now, they somehow still manage to be romantic. Louis is definitely falling in love with her -he just can't help himself. And Ava's on track to do the same, if only she didn't have so many problems right now.
The way you included his part-veela genes was really cool. You hardly ever see anyone picture it like that -with him struggling with it. But I like it this way and it makes sense that he could be insecure about it, sad as it is. I love him. He's adorable, sweet, sexy, and romantic all in one and a great character. :) I loved how you showed that he has some trust issues because he never really knows how true others' affections are for him, or if it's just his charm. Makes things very complicated, too haha! And this may be a stretch, but can't you sort of apply that to real life? With charming people. Or popular people. Of just people in general. A lot of the time it's hard to tell if people genuinely care about you or if they're just interested in you for some other reason. Like Ava and her one-night stands. She's looking for a distraction and doesn't want to be alone, then she goes to the bar and finds a charming guy who seems to like her. Sure, she doesn't really expect anything to come of it, but isn't she always a little disappointed when they leave in the morning and never call her? Matt seems to be her only genuine friend. She knows he cares about her, but with everyone else it's a guessing game and you jus have to risk it. I think everyone faces that to some extent. And it sucks. So I sympathize with Louis for having to deal with that all the time.
I freaking love him. And Ava's pretty cool, too. ;)
Update soon!!

Author's Response: They are pretty cute, aren't they? Although romantic certainly wasn't what Ava was going for ;) Ahaha, well, if you say so. We'll see.
Thanks! Yeah, I had a lot of fun figuring out how I was going to deal with that. Because I think it is something that's kind of important to talk about, you know? And I think this could be a realistic interpretation. I do adore him ♥ I don't think it's a stretch at all. You always have to put yourself out there with people, because they could like you for a million reasons, and not necessarily for who you are. Ava definitely deals with the same thing - it can be a bit disappointing when you realize that guy you thought was really nice and cute actually didn't care about /you/ at all. So yes, it's definitely applicable to many situations and people.
I love him too ♥ And Ava, of course!
Thanks for the lovely review :D

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