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Review:Lululuna says:
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Millie is just so funny! I enjoyed her mental thought process when her ex-boyfriend tried to kiss her, and how frustrated yet resigned she is to his obvious idiocy. Also, Lily is just so funny in this story as well! I like how you highlighted the differences between Lily and Millie (hey! that sort of rhymes!) with how they treat their homework. The line: "A delusional ex-boyfriend and two best friends in love: one with a boy, and the other with her homework." just really made me laugh.

I like how Millie has a talent/love for drawing, by the way! I'm interested to see how that comes into play in the future! :)

Ah, Sirius. I liked how his friends didn't even know about this Marissa character, and how Sirius felt the need to point out that she wasn't there to make Millie jealous. I also appreciate how Remus was the one to suggest a prank, as he's often portrayed to be the goody two-shoes in the group. You do a really good job of turning these familiar characters into young, silly boys, and it's great!

Another great chapter! :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you find her amusing - to me, she often just comes across as plain weird. Her mental processes are quite different to mine in a lot of aspects, so it can be a challenge to write her at times. I'm really glad that you enjoyed yourself with Rex and related shenanigans. I've always wanted to write a character like him!

Remus always seemed like a criminal mastermind when he was younger - still waters run deep and everything. And the Marauders can be difficult to write at times, so I'm really happy to hear that you find them natural and believable.

Thanks for dropping by!


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