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Review:CharliesRose says:
Ahhh, the phone... I kinda get the feeling that the next chapter will have a huge anti climax... because of the whole phone ringing... you know? Maybe that's just me.
I loved this chapter, love Lily and her friends, I think their little story is so creative and well put it. But the mention of Al... we haven't really seen much of him in a while, or Freddie really? Just wondering if either of them will turn up soon?
Okay well there's not really much else to say, I'm pretty sure you know by now that I'm in love with this story, James is just the cutest person in the world. And everything is so believable, i'm so jealous of how well you write.
Well done and I can't wait to read the next chapter :)

Author's Response: The next chapter's in the queue ... and I hope it doesn't disappoint. :) Albus is proving a tough character! The trouble is there are so many family members that it's hard to give them all air time, and the last few chapters have focused much more on Carlotta. Albus will appear again soon though! Freddie's story needs more focus and resolution, so that will come to the fore soon as well. :) Really glad to know you're still enjoying, thanks as always for reviewing!

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