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Review:missclaire17 says:
I think James is getting himself back into the mix of everything to prove a point to Natasha. I could be TOTALY wrong but I feel like it'd be the type of thing that he would say to Natasha that if he can do it, then so can she. Either way, I'm glad that he's doing better, irregardless of the reason why. It's time that James did get himself back into society.

I agree about that bit about Molly; I feel like if Molly changed at all, if she wasn't herself with her bluntness and no-nonsense attitude, you'd be taking away basically who she is because all of that really makes up her personality. She really cares deep down, and though it's hard for her to express, the fact that she's so blunt lets you know that she's not just joking around or trying to make you feel better by being nice.

I really hope Natasha will do the right thing. I'm sad that she left Hogwarts; the fact that she really can't stand up for herself and be honest with what she really wants makes me frustrated. It's not even so much that she can't stand up for herself, but that she doesn't realize the truth: that she's so much better away from the life she leads as Miss Teen Witch and that she doesn't want to lead that life herself.

Wonderful update despite the fact that nothing really happened; I liked seeing Molly try to make an intervention.

Author's Response: I like your James theory very much. It's actually something that will never be explained, since the only explanation that could happen would be if it was in James' point of view, so I left it up to interpretation.

Ahah yay I'm glad you liked the Molly bit! I just really love her as a character so I try to put her in as much as I can. And I also thought this would help people who didn't like Molly warm up to her.

Oh Natasha is hands down the most frustrating character I've ever written. She is like the exact opposite of me. I would never be able to let someone else dictate my life. So I'm right there with you with wanting her to make a realization!

Thank you so much for reviewing and I'm so glad you like the story :)
-Rebecca



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