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Review:bowtruckleinlove says:
Hi! So I started to read your story a week or so ago and then had to leave it, so i read ch2-20 last night and today. to start with I couldnt stop clicking to the next chapter but I did start to drift off over the last few chapters, so I'm definately hoping that you mean it when you say a lot more will be happening within the next few chapters.
The other thing that I REALLY love is that you decided to go with Al as the dad instead of James like so many of the stories you see (Not that I have a problem with that, it's just a refreshing difference).
Keep up the good writing and please, please don't let this turn into an unfinished story... I really can't wait to see what happens when Al and the Potter's find out the truth!
Also I hope that he comes to his senses soon and realises that no matter what people are going to get hurt over and over again through their lives and that it's a really stupid reason to stay with someone (To be honest that's been the thing that I've found to be the most unrealistc with your story, especially when he already knows that Hattie doesnt really love him and he really has no feelings for her).
Anywho I hope you don't take this as a bad review because that's not how I meant it, I was just giving a few of my thoughts in hope that you'll be able to put my mind at ease in a response maybe...?

Author's Response: Hi,

I know, and I promise there is a lot of drama, action and plot twists coming your way.

I LOVE Al/OC as well as James/OC but I really wanted to write Al because I think he's such a different character compared to his siblings.

I have no intention of letting this turn into an unfinished story unless my life turns really busy again and I have zero time to write/update.

I don't take it as bad and thank you for reading and reviewing!!!

Soph :)

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