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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

Hey there, its Gabbie with your requested review and I'm sorry that it took a minute. Anyway, on to this!
I have to say that I like the idea of your Rose not being overly boy-crazy like I've read in some other fanfics, it gets a little old after awhile. While I enjoy that she's reading and trying to stay out of the drama (Although funny) I would have liked a bit more interaction and background from her. Perhaps you'll go into more detail about that later but what a nice change, you've put Al and Scorpy into the same House! And its not Gryffindor! I think that's a cool story dynamic personally and I'm interested to know more about their bromance, hahaha.
I liked the introduction of her friends too, I can see in future chapters that they're going to bounce off each other pretty well. Can't wait to see how this supposed cheating scandal works out though...hehehe.
But what's really keeping me interested is the fact that there seems to be some sort of history between Rose and Scorpius. I can't wait to figure out what it is! I wish you had put in a few more hints and made some details about their relationship, her family and that sort of thing but you have so much room to do that in later chapters.
Aside from what I mentioned, you've got me curious, especially by that ending. Why should Rose care who he was dating? What is the background between them? I really like that! I can't put my finger on it...which is a good thing I think!
Thanks for the read, feel free to re-request!
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Hello :)
Thank you so much for this VERY sweet review! :)
I'm glad you liked so many things about my story. I know I've broken away from a few cliches or stereotypes, rather. I'm happy that you seem to like the ideas I've come up with :)
I'll keep in mind that I have to be more descriptive. My first chapter is rather short and to the point, I know. But, I hope I have shown some improvement in the other chapters.
Anyway, thanks a lot :)
I think I will be re-requesting soon.


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