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Review:CassiePotter says:
I think you did a great job with this story. For being such a short piece, I think you did an amazing job getting the tone of the story across. You really set the stage quickly, and got into the emotion of the story right away, which is hard sometimes, so well done! I really loved how much we can see that Lily will do anything to save her son, and it almost makes it more heartbreaking that she dies, even though we know it's going to happen. One little typo I saw was here- The calming effect of Lily's voice, full of love and tenderness, was enough to quiet Harry as he blinked up innocently at Harry
I knew that wasn't on purpose, but I thought I would just point it out so you knew about it. Great work with this story, and good luck in your challenges! 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your lovely review! I'm glad that I managed to convey the emotions with as little words as possible. James and Lily's death is always something difficult for me, so writing this one-shot was special. I will definitely fix that typo! Again, thank you so much for reading!

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