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Review:Rose says:
Hi- I really like your idea so far, I hope you don't mind a bit of criticism.
In the first paragraph, you say Lira's name too much that it breaks up the flow of the ideas and action, if you explained what was going on a bit more clearly it would make a bit more sense.
I think you meant gnome* in the last paragraph.
Perhaps give the reader more information about how Lira and Draco "got to know each other" and why they didn't know each other better before if they were in the same year and same house. It would help to understand their characters better through conversation between them and would pull your reader into the story.
Just suggestions of course. xxx
Overall I like your style and your characters have great potential. Keep it up :)

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for the review. I'm actually glad you caught all that because I started this a few years ago and wasn't very good at all! I'm getting ready for a bit of reconstruction soon! Thanks again!

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