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Review:EarthsTrueGreen says:
Wow. That was great, I'm not sure why you feel that it might not have made any sense because it did, and please don't say you are out of sync with this story, not with a cliff hanger like that.
As for what you said about Hugo, all i'm going to say is that when I write stuff happens that I never planned on all the time and it usually makes things better. I think it is about time for someone to have found out about her little secret especially because you are hitting the climax of the story, at least I think you are. Rose is slowly becoming unraveled and for that reason her secrets are as well.
Even though this chapter may not have had as many juicy moments, it was still very informative. The way she answered Dave, I have a feeling that he isn't just going to let it go, and now that Hugo does know I wonder if he might start to bud in somehow. As for Will I have two guess to he might like and I think it's either Lucy or possibly Rose simply because they have been talking more lately and you did say that he had become happier when she started to talk to him.
I'm glad to hear that Scorpius isn't the father but depending on what happens in the next chapter I'm not entirely sure Rose will believe it, but then again she might because you said that that action seemed very out of character for him... Anyways I don't know.
I love this story can't believe I didn't notice an update sooner but I was happy to see that you did. Please don't give up on it... It is absolutely wonderful and if you are loosing touch it doesn't show in your writing or your characters at all.

Author's Response: Hello EarthsTrueGreen!

I'm so sorry it took so long to reply! Thank you so much and don't worry I'm getting back into this story, I've just had a really busy summer. The next chapter is in the queue so should be up in a few days *hopefully*.

I know, the bit with Hugo was so unexpected but I loved writing it anyway. There's some more unexpected bits in the next chapter and I'm just going to roll with it. I wasn't planning on anyone finding out about her for a while yet but this just seemed to fit and I was glad it was Hugo, he is her brother after all. As for this being the climax of the story, I'm not sure, there is still quite a bit to go! But yes, Rose is beginning to unravel slightly, especially in the next chapter some changes are evident in her so I hope you enjoy it.

There is a lot more happening in the next chapter, so much so that it may be a little confusing… Dave is a very odd character and to be honest, I don't even know what is going on in his head sometimes. Hugo doesn't strike me as the interfering type but we'll just have to wait and see. Ah, Will. I have a soft spot for Will, not going to lie. And your guesses are interesting. I had two people who I originally planned to like one person and have ended up liking a different person and Will is one of them. You are very observant anyhow.

Rose is definitely in for a shock in the next chapter but yes, she did think it was out of character for him. You'll just have to read it and find out.

Thank you! I always look forward to your reviews! And once again, so sorry for the delay in updating but it is in the queue, I promise! Thank you so much,

Irish Myth.

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