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Review:Rachel says:
SO MUCH AWESOME!!! This was a great chapter, I didn't see anything that didn't make sense, it all flowed really nicely.

Can I just say that I am TOTALLY intrigued by Will?? You have definitely done your job as an author, because I am dying to know what he's about!

Hugo was a little judgmental about Rose's arrangements, why does everyone jump on the 'Rose is so horrible and in the wrong' train so immediately? I think James was just as much a part of their falling out.

Seriously waiting for some more Scorpius/Rose action, but I love everything about this story! Such a great concept, and Rose as a character is so complex; I LOVE IT!

Please update soon! :D

Author's Response: Hello again Rachel,

THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! Oh good, that's a relief, thanks. I love it when people are intrigued by my characters and Will may just be hiding something. Well thank you and you will just have to keep reading in order to find out what.

I think Hugo is just shocked that she allowed her and James' friendship to crumble because of it. He is her brother so he is bound to get a little protective and just wants to look out for her. What Rose does isn't exactly 'normal' so sometimes people find it hard to understand. The fact she is not very approachable also doesn't help. We'll see and hear more from James in later chapters.

There is some Scorpius/Rose interaction in the next chapter but I'm hoping to get some 'action' in soon as well, I'm just trying to figure out how to fit it into the storyline. Thank you so much! I'm so sorry it took so long to reply and update but the next chapter is in the queue and I really hope you like it! Thank you for reviewing,

Irish Myth.

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