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Review:missclaire17 says:
That was a pretty good reason that Liz gave to Lily to help her. I would have expected Lily to threaten Liz about losing the cloak, ruining it, etc. but she surprised me in the fact that she didnt'. I can imagine people being scared to anger Lily. She sounds like the type of person that you wouldn't want to cross.

I really want to know more about William and Liz's relationship with each other because it's rather interesting the way that she talks about him. Liz doesn't mention him if she doesn't have to and at the same time, while she isn't openly scathing about William, it's obvious to see they don't have a good relationship because it almost seems like Liz feels overshadowed.

It's rather funny to read about the water pouring onto Liz. It seems like something they'd do. xD

I think that Liz will be discovered she stole James's invisibility cloak when she finds out why James is acting so weird. If that's James's big secret, I can see that in return for keeping James's secret, James forgives Liz for stealing the cloak.

Anyways; I hope we find out soon about James! Just some advice, it'd be better not to drag it out TOO long. Update soon! (:

Author's Response: HIII! First off, thanks so much for this review! I love hearing what y'all think. So glad you think Lily was pretty on the mark. She is a lot younger than Liz, after all; I didn't want her to be too intimidating, but at the same time, growing up with Al and James as older brothers couldn't be easy.

As for Williams, you'll learn more about him and Liz in the future, as well as the Liz/Invisibility Cloak plan!! Thanks again for continuing to read and review, and hopefully you won't have to wait too long to find out some answers ;) xo, the_giant_squid


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