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Review:Illuminate says:
Hi! Review Tag!

This is probably the best chapter yet! :D You really focus on her thoughts and feelings, and that horrible stasis of calm after a traumatic event where you just don't know what to do with yourself. I think you convey those feelings very well indeed, and we're really getting to grips with Dominique's character.

I don't like her boss! xD She seems like a slightly more professional version of Rita Skeeter. I hope Dom manages to sort out her job while coming to terms with what's happened to her.

Good cliffhanger! I hope her relationship with Teddy doesn't suffer, and that he will be there for her after this crisis.

Great job!

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reading and reviewing.

I am glad you liked this chapter and the way I focused on her internal turmoil. I am pleased that you think I conveyed her feelings well and you're coming to terms with Dom's character.

Her boss is one mean person xP A more professional (and evil) version of Rita Skeeter sounds about right, haha.

I am glad you enjoyed this and you are interested in what's going to happen next. Thanks!

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