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Review:unakrnkiller says:
This is probably one of my favorite chapters so far. It's just so adorable. Leave it to Sirius to buy a baby a broomstick. I love that you mentioned Petunia. I imagined that she would have nothing to do with Lily at this point, but at least she thinks of her on Christmas.

I hope we see some action in the next chapter. I would really love to see more of Severus's POV. I feel like I'm slowly losing any emotion I had about their relationship because we haven't had any Sev/Beth interaction. :(

Thank you for a great story. Keep it up.

Author's Response: I'm pleased as punch to know you thought this chapter was adorable! :D I had a lot of fun writing it -- Marauder-type antics always are, and James just sort of poured forth here without too much effort. Petunia actually did give Lily a vase for Christmas, as mentioned in the scrap of letter that Harry found at Grimmauld Place in DH. I like knowing that Petunia would still have thought of Lily, even as this point in both of their lives.

Action as seen in ITR is more lacking in this chapter, of course, because Beth isn't on mission work, but I've just checked ahead to tomorrow's update and I can assure you that there's just a bit of drama. I hope you enjoy it! And I am sad to hear you're losing Sneth emotion, although I will make you a very solid promise that it won't be absent forever. Honest! :)

Thank you for returning and leaving such a nice review. ♥ It really heartens me to know you're still sticking around!

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