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Review:academica says:
Hi again! Back for Team Blue & the Review Battle!

Okay, this chapter really cracked me up. I love your writing style! It's so over-the-top and dramatic, and it reminds me a lot of Scott Pilgrim in the way everything is played up. I hate to admit this, but Lucy isn't totally off with her methods. Exposure therapy can be very hard! Thankfully, she seemed to have the sort of personality to be able to handle it pretty well :) I also really liked the way you seamlessly incorporated magical elements into traditional therapy techniques; for instance, using a Boggart seems like a great initial step before transitioning to real, actual exposure in treating someone's fear.

I love this line:

Of course, it was all a pack of lies, which is why it got such high network ratings, and why middle-aged single women loved it so much.

I'm really intrigued to see how Lorcan's next encounter with Cassiopeia will go--assuming he doesn't knock his brother out and end things here :)

Great work!

-Amanda

Author's Response: Thank you for your review!! I'm sorry that it's taken me so long to respond! :)

I'm so glad that you thought this chapter was funny. I'm not quite sure that humor is my strongest suit, but I tried to make this chapter as ridiculous and overblown as possible. I've never actually heard of Scott Pilgrim, but I've recently been watching a lot of the show Fawlty Towers, which is a very satirical, ridiculous series. I guess I took some of the style from that. :)

Lorcan won't knock Lysander out, but he's got a lot coming up in the next and final chapter. :D

Thanks for your review!!

~UnluckyStar57


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