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Review:-BookDinosaur- says:
-BookDInosaur- here for the Ravenclaw Review Battle!

I really enjoyed reading this chapter. I really liked all the description you put in, it painted a really vivid picture in my mind of what was happening, but at the same time, there wasn't so much description that I got bored reading it.

Your charactersation of Persephone was really good, even though this chapter was pretty short I feel like I know her already.

There's such an air of mystery surrounding this chapter, right now I really want to read on to see what happens next.

The flow of your story was really good as well and I couldn't see any grammar or spelling mistakes, so well done there.

All in all, this was a really good chapter that left me wanting more.

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks so much for your review, and I'm sorry that I haven't responded to it until now. (I've been a bit lazy, I'm afraid...)

I'm very glad that you liked my description-that-wasn't-too-descriptive, and Persephone's characterization. This chapter was my very first chapter of fanfiction EVER, so I made it extremely short in my anticipation to get it posted. :)

Thank you so much for your lovely comments!!

~UnluckyStar57


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