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Review:navyfail says:
I like how you characterized Helena and Rowena. And how you expressed her love of books is lovely.The drawing part was something that left me to think.

The "no expression of joy" and "less than a perfect wedding" left me wondering. What I am a bit unclear about is why she wants her mother not see that picture?

I did find it humorous that Helena could freely say that she did find a man handsome.

Favorite Quote;
"That would require space enough in his speech for me to insert a word or two."

All in all, another great chapter.


Author's Response: I'm happy to hear that you enjoyed my characterization of Helena and her mother.

Helena, like many girls, does dream of a fantasy wedding and a perfect husband. She's dissatisfied with her mother's push for marriage because she hasn't found a man whom she feels is worthy of her just yet, despite her advanced age (for the time). So she's hesitant to let her mother know that she, too, dreams of her eventual wedding, for fear that her mother will use that to manipulate her or guilt her into settling down.

Thank you for the kind review, and I hope to see you stop by again soon for another chapter!


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