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Review:-BookDinosaur- says:
-BookDinosaur- here again. I've finished reviewing all the chapters of the story so far! :D

So, I really liked this chapter again. I like how you've written Hermione's acting skills, we all know she can be a bit snobby, but this put-on arrogance made me laugh.

I also really like how you've portrayed Mr Conners, he seems like a really shifty guy, and it makes sense that not all the Muggles were innocent during that time as well.

Just one typo that I spotted-you wrote 'And how they not have believed him?' I think a word's missing in between 'how' and 'they'. Either way, that sentence doesn't quite make sense.

All in all, a good chapter that left me wanting more, so please update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Again, this was a fun chapter to write. Both Ron and Hermione feel a little easier being someone else as they look like someone else. :)

Mr Conners resisted any attempt to be nice. But he certainly does have a guilty conscience.

I think the word "could" got left out. Really should slow down a little when typing. :) I will be fixing that sentence.

My next chapter is nearly ready to post. It still needs just a little more work before it's ready.

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!

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