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Review:-BookDinosaur- says:
Hey, -BookDinosaur- here again! Sorry for the wait! D':

I liked this chapter, I especially liked at the beginning how you showed both Ron and Hermione's grievances with each other, rather than just one point of view of the bickering, it balanced out the story a bit for me.

I also liked how you had Ron and Hermione change their appearances and their names, but if it were me, I'd just write a bit more shock/surprise at the complete change in appearances. I mean, changing almost everything the way you look isn't something you can just get used to.

As always, I feel your description and dialogue was really well balanced and I loved the little bicker at the end, Ron and Hermione are acting really canonly, so well done there.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

I've added a note to add a little more emotional response to the change in looks. Thank you for pointing it out.

This was a fun chapter to write, especially with Hermione calling Voldemort a Nitwit. :)

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!


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