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Review:MargaretLane says:
*laughs* The part where Ron is telling Hugo he won't be disinherited if he's not in Gryffindor is brilliant. With one line, we get the impression that Ron's been joking about that, that Hugo's been worrying he might be serious and that Hermione is really annoyed that Ron would say that. So much information conveyed by one, really natural line.

Hmm, I'm guessing this Bellatrix Lestrange child is someway related to the original Bellatrix Lestrange. But what kind of people would call their daughter after a convicted murderess? This is quite intriguing.

Yikes, James's year are a bit young to be getting topless.

I like the way Hugo freaks out. It's irrational, as Emily points out, but it's understandable, considering the magnitude of what the first Bellatrix Lestrange did.

Oooh, I wonder who this dark figure is. This is getting mysterious and ominous.

Author's Response: Thanks again for the great review. I checked over a bit for any typos and I'm glad that you found it funny. With James and the girl, I might retype it cos she is meant to have her bra on and stuff. I always imagined James as a sort of player. Thank you for being amazing!

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