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Review:MargaretLane says:
I really like the way you give us an insight into the personalities of James, Albus and Lily in this chapter.

And I really like the way Albus reassures her the Dementors won't get into her room and James says they'll find a way. That's funny and fits so well with how I imagine the characters.

I also like the way James almost kills Albus. It seems like a likely thing to happen with young wizards, especially when one is James.

Your sentence about Teddy's grandfather being called after him is kind of confusing. I assume you meant that Teddy was called after his grandfather, as his grandfather could hardly be named after somebody who hadn't been born yet.

Also, you've misspelled Lily as Lilly. It only has one l in the middle.

I wonder what the relevance of the older family members is. *reads on to find out*

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

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