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Review:ohmymerlin says:
I. HAVE. TO. BE. 300.

I swear, if someone gets this spot I'm going to be extremely upset.

I hate her mother! And Georgiana! They're so bossy and mean and don't let Tash live her own life!

She's a 17 (or 18? I can't remember right now) and she deserves to live her own life!

And just when she was starting to get happy... :'(

Seriously though, when you said 'THE END' I nearly had a heart attack! Why must you do this to me?! :p

Congratulations on finishing WRITING the story! I can't wait to see the updates! :D

This is going to sound so strange, but I liked the fact that I didn't like this chapter! I didn't notice any grammatical errors or anything (I'm really jealous at the way you write! You write so wonderfully!) and I find it quite difficult to believe that this hasn't been edited! :p

I was very sad as I read. And then James was watching. All I wanted Tash to do was to yell, "NO! I'M GOING TO LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER WITH JAMES GOODBYE!"

But alas.

She didn't even get to say a proper goodbye to any of them! Excuse me as I snivel in a corner. :p

I really wish Tash would just speak her mind. She really needs to!


Anyway, absolutely loved (well, you know...) this chapter! Any hints for me? :D

Can't wait to see the next ones! I can't believe it's nearly over!

10/10! :)

Author's Response: Yay! You were 300! Congrats!

I hate Georgiana too, but I actually really like Tash's mum. Don't know why. I just find her really interesting.

And Tash is actually 16. Fun fact: I was debating naming this story Sixteen Beauty Queen for a while because it rhymed.

AHah but don't worry, the end won't come until everything's resolved. There were way too many loose ends for me to end the story!

And I'm so flattered you like how I writer. I can't believe you didn't find any grammar errors because normally I'm really awful with them.

Yes, Tash didn't get to say a proper goodbye. To be honest I don't think she wanted to because it would've been way too hard.

And yes, Tash speaking her mind definitely needs to happen. Why must she be so difficult?!

As for hints... there will be an appearance of someone from the Hogwarts crew in the next chapter. Is that a good one?

Anyway, next chapter's in the queue so you shall see soon! Thank you so much for reviewing :)

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