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Review:Holly_Mist says:
I was meaning to leave a review for the previous chapter but you posted a new one, so hey ho!

First of all, as a response to your answer to my previous review: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you like P&P! It made me smile when you said you did :)

Secondly, moving on to this chapter. I liked it, but i felt it a but of a filler! Although, James and Fred sort of made up for that! Also, i feel that your chapters could be a little longer! Move the plot forward more quickly! Otherwise, i think you're doing great :)

And once again, the problems with the spacings! I mentioned it in my previous review as well, it tends to get annoying :/

And before i forget - Albus. I need more Albus! So i hope to see him soon ;)

Author's Response: Welcome back, girly!

Of course! P&P is wonderful and I can't wait for you to update soon!

It was a tad bit of a filler so you are correct. I really just wanted to bring in Fred & James because you are going to start to see more and more of Al and his family as the story goes on. I'm going to try to aim for longer chapters as well! The next chapter (Kim & Les Possible) will be up soon but I have a new story in the que at the moment. There will be some brief Albus in there but the next chapter which I'm thinking of combining with the one after it to make it longer will have loads more of Al and certain members of his family and friends.

We're not that far into the plot and I don't want to rush it but it'll most likely start getting jucier the more you see Al and his family in the story. So don't worry you'll see more of Albus and more of the plot! :D

Also, my apologies! I tried your suggestion with the paste of plain text but than I lost all my boldings and allignments. Also, HPFF sends my chapters back saying they don't have double return so I always have to space a lot. I'll try to fix it a bit for the next chapter!

Thank you so much for the review! xx


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