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Review:navyfail says:
The descriptions were utterly amazing.
I really liked the imagery and how you didn't reveal anything by just saying but showing it too.
The bits of history like the tiara and her running away to the forest were interesting and well added.

"wicked tiara twisted up in her long hair"
That part got me with how you changed the mood. The story went from 'beautiful tiara' to 'wicked tiara', which I enjoyed.
Anyways I am hooked and can't wait to read the rest.

~Sama
10/10

Author's Response: Hello, and thank you! I'm very big on "show, not tell," and it's great to hear that came through. If you continue to read, you'll see more history and details, which you will hopefully enjoy.

The mood in the story will fluctuate a lot based on the relationship between the two main characters.

Thank you for this lovely review!

-Amanda


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