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Review:Illuminate says:
Hi! Review Tag again!

The chapters are just getting better and better! This was a great reason to develop characterisations and get the story kickstarted.

I've never read a story about Slytherins before, at least not in the POV of a Slytherin. It's very interesting to read a story where the main character actually supports Voldemort and is not actually insane or crazed (well, as sane as you can be if you support him xD). Her feelings towards the Dark Lord and Muggleborns seem so organic and just a part of her, just a belief she has. It's so interesting to see that, in fact, there are families on both sides of the War that are affected by Voldemort, not just Muggleborns and the side of good :) It's written very subtly, and I like that :)

I'm liking the romance you brought in at the end. That, too, is subtle, and I'm looking forward to seeing where you take it (don't think the boy in the prologue is Theo, so very interested for that character to be introduced if he isn't!). You write secret longing very well indeed, very true to life. I also like your use of her Legilimency, it seems like such a useful skill to have xD

All in all, great writing, great chapter :D

Author's Response: Hi! :) I'm so happy to see you back!

I'm really happy you're liking the story so far, and have made it past the slightly rough (in my opinion) first chapters! I'm glad you like Tor and the Slytherin POV of the story: I really enjoy writing this in Hogwarts era to show the other side of the conflict. I'm glad you like the balance of good and evil, and how the families of the DE are negatively affected as well.

Haha, well you'll just have to keep reading! :) Tor definitely has some secret longing going on for Theo, and it does get addressed very frequently in the story. I'm glad you also like the addition of the Legilimency skill, it is unique and a fun characteristic to incorporate! :)

Thank you for another lovely review, my dear! :D


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