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Review:Lululuna says:
Hello! :) So I'm just going to jump right into how much I enjoy this story. I really love the fact that Greta is a Muggle, and that we get to explore the strangeness of the wizarding world (and particularly the madness of the Weasleys) through her confused and quirky point of view. I really enjoy how she's a blogger, and how Muggle technology is such a large part of her life as opposed to Astrid, who is involved in seeing the world through magical lenses. It shows us that Muggles and exciting and special, too! :)

I really like the way you write Greta as well. Sure, the story is weird, but in the most well-crafted and wittily knitted way possible. (Is 'wittily' a word? My spell-check isn't working!). I love the differences between Greta and Astrid and how they don't quite get along, and how much Greta makes light of things like "sticks." Seeing that many gingers at once must be quite overwhelming, and I don't blame Greta for her awkward outbursts. In fact, they were quite entertaining. Hansel the rabbit sounds so adorable! :)

Anyway, this was a quirky and well-written beginning to your story, and I can't wait to keep reading about the antics of Greta and the Wheeze-lees! :D

Author's Response: AH. REVIEWS! This is an exciting daaay.

I've always liked taking a step back and thinking of what any situation looks like to outside eyes. I think fanfiction is a special area for that, because the readers already know the setting so well--and especially Harry Potter fanfiction, because we're enamoured with the universe but we understand the outside perspective as well because of course we ARE the outside perspective, being Muggles. That whole concept is pretty much what birthed this fic (eek awkward wording much?) so I'm glad you like that!

Quirky and well-written is the best compliment ever, thank you! I think wittily is a word... and paired with knitted, it makes for some pretty ace phrasing.

Gingers are scary. Very scary.

What a brilliant review, thanks so much for leaving your (super amazing!) thoughts on Greta and all of that. My giddy smile shall not depart! Erm yeah, I though that'd sound dramatic. Anyway. Thanks and stuff, yep :)

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