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Review:Lululuna says:
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Aw, the awkward adventures of Sirius and Millie continue! I like how in denial Millie is about her attraction to Sirius (I mean, who wouldn't be?!), and how she's determined to stay cool with him. They actually seem to have a lot in common if she gave him a chance! Also, her friends' teasing her is entertaining as always. The mention of her nightmares and her family made me curious once again about Millie's past, and what role exactly her family plays in her life.

Again, I'm really enjoying the changes in perspective and getting both Sirius and Millie's POVs. I find with a lot of Sirius/OC stories Sirius is made out as this deity-like man candy, and this story gives him humanity and depth beyond that, which I love! The interactions between the marauders are great as well, and seem realistic for teenage boys. I also like how they call each other by their nicknames, even in Sirius' head! :) Good job once again, and I'll for sure be back soon! :D

Author's Response: Haha! I should change the title to that! The Awkward Adventures of Sirius and Millie! It has a nice ring to it. Their adventures tend not to get any less awkward anytime soon. Such is the nature of their relationship, and it is oh so fun to write!

Millie and Sirius really do have a lot in common - a lot more than either of them think. It's funny because I don't think either of them ever realise it.

I know what you mean about the hero-worship Sirius gets. I used to eat all those fics up, but I realised eventually that he is a person, and it would be a lot of fun to see what the world's like from his perspective. I'm glad that it humanises him a little! And so happy to hear you like the Marauder shenanigans! They're some of the hardest bits to write, so it's always nice to hear them being well received!

Thanks for dropping by!

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