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Review:Lululuna says:
Hi! :)

First of all, I really enjoyed your summary and how you incorporated references and evidence of both Hermione and Ron. I love imagining Rose as a sort of hybrid between the two, who loves books and learning but also has that Weasley love for Quidditch, and something all her own. In this chapter, it was great how she mentioned how good her book was, it really reminded me of Hermione! :P

You did a good job of setting up the context and the background of Rose and her friends. I like her friends so far, especially the description of how Pat expects her boyfriends to act in comparison with Alice's, well, craziness. I like how Rose kind of balances between the two of them. It's also interesting how Albus is in Slytherin, and it was Scorpius who made him feel okay about it. I'm interested to read more about their friendship or bromance, which you've hinted at here, and about the dynamics between Rose and Scorpius. So they've already had some key moments together? Very intruiging! :)

I do with this had been a bit longer, though of course it's only an introductory chapter. You did a good job of setting up the scene and context of what looks like a great Rose/Scorpius!

Thanks for the swap! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review :)

Haha, I get what you mean. When I think of Rose, I get this feeling that she has a little bit of both her parents. So, I'm glad you got what I was going for :)

Describing her friends was fun :) Because they both are so different, and yet, they are best friends. That's kind of what happens with all of at some point. I love Al. I think he's a great character... He's been used well in every next gen fic I've read, so I'd like to give him a lot of importance :) And the bromance shows that Scorpius isn't really a bad guy, himself!

I know this chapter is a little short, but I did make it that way on purpose because it was mt first chapter ever! And I was kind of just testing how well this would work! :) The following two chapters are longer :)

Thanks a lot for review and swap! :)


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