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Review:800 words of heaven says:

If this is your first shot at writing fanfic, this is something of which you should be immensely proud. It holds a lot of potential!

Plot-wise, we've seen the love/hate mould before, but cliches can be fun! I, for one, love them, and try and include as many as I can in as many unironic ways as I can! This sounds like a fun story!

We've only briefly met the characters, so I haven't really formed any sort of opinion of them, yet, but the three girls at least seem to be vibrant and colourful, with lots of places where personalities can clash and complement to their hearts' contents!

Also, I'm REALLY looking forward to the Scorpius/Albus bromance! I'm a huge fan of bromances!

Author's Response: Yay! :D

Yes, this was my very first shot at writing fanfic. Thank you so much :) This will give me some motivation. I'm currently writing chapter 4.

I decided to start off with a cliche, on purpose, because this was my first story and I was eager to try and re-invent a cliche. So, I'm trying to make it fresh and fun. I'm glad it came across :)

As for the characters, I think they will develop along with the story, and I have tried to make sure they go well together, while having their fair share of ups and downs :) Thank you so much for thinking so too.

Keep reading. I'll try to keep you happy.
thanks for the review :)

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