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Review:nott theodore says:
Hey Kiana! I didn't get chance to leave a review when you updated this the other day, but I really wanted to tell you what I thought about it.

I think this chapter was even better than the first one, which is saying something. You have a real talent for parodies - I was laughing all the way through! That first line "Michael Corner knew he was some hot stuff." made me giggle so much. The continuation to this chapter from the last one worked really well.

There was so much in this that made me laugh that I could probably quote the whole chapter back at you if I wanted to! The comment on blondes always beating him to the girls was great, and the way he used tanning booths instead. His thought process was hilarious, too, like when he saw Millicent Bulstrode and thought she'd do if he couldn't find anyone better, and when he overruled the fact that Lavender is crazy because she's hot and famous.

"The power of the raven would triumph over the lion and snake." - a bit of house pride coming out in you there, isn't there? :P

Lavender was fantastic in this, and I'm really enjoying her. She works so well for parodies - it's kind of like we see her portrayed in the films here. When she was describing how she tried to get Viktor Krum to make Hermione jealous I found it hysterical!

It's great how romance takes the precedence in this, even though they've all fought this horrible war against Voldemort. It highlights how silly they are and works so well for a parody/

Michael as a womaniser works surprisingly well! He probably fancied himself after going out with Ginny and Cho Chang - the two girls that Harry Potter, the Boy Who Lived himself went out with. That's some sort of claim to fame for him, right? And you wrote it in quite a believable way, as well as me laughing all the way through!

I'm looking forward to the next chapter of this - it's so fun to read and a refreshing change to more serious stories!

Sian :)

Author's Response: Hi Sian!

Haha, I think I preferred this chapter too, because writing big-headed people is a lot of fun :P I'm glad that you liked the continuation because first of all it was just going to be random stories thrown together but this was a lot more fun!

I'm so glad that you wanted to quote a lot as that's always a good thing! I thought the inclusion of the blondes would be fun to thrown in because there's always the hot blondes in every society! Of course he's not going to reject Lavender just because she's a bit pyschotic, that would be mean :P

Yup, Ravenclaw is awesome so I had to include it!

I feel a bit mean showing Lavender in a bad light because I do like her as a character, but like you said there are so many angles you can go with her it would be a shame not to include her!

Of course romance is more important! If Voldy had some in his life, he may have not gone to war :P

I'm not even sure why I decided to make him into one but I thought it would be fun :P Thanks for this amazing review and I'm so glad that you liked it :D

-Kiana


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