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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
Aw!! This is so adorable!!

I don't always randomly review, but when I do, I find stories that make me very happy. :)

Seriously, this is a really great little one-shot. I love how you've taken Molly's love for cooking and baking and chronicled it through the years in such a charming fashion. Several phrases really stood out to me, and I'll list them for you, just because they were so good:

"She loved the intensity of the colour of the fruits against the soft white of the cream underneath: to her they looked like jewels, and were prettier than real ones."

"...chocolate, the ingredient as versatile as them - sometimes subtle and soft, other times strong and commanding."

"...this most precious of gifts made all the more dear by its unexpectedness and seeming improbability."

Those are just a few examples of some really good turns-of-phrase that pervaded this entire story. I hope you know that you're really good with description and narration. :)

I also like how you've made this love of cooking an inter-generational thing. I'm not sure if Ginny ever liked to cook, and we really don't know much about Lily Luna, but the way you've incorporated cooking into their personalities is really fantastic.

This was a very good story. I'm glad that my mood for random reviewing caused me to choose it! :)


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