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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
Hi! This looks like it's going to be a really fun story!

I love how you've started a little love story in terms of biscuits and tea. There's something that's so cute about that, and it's even cuter that you've chosen to make it about Draco and Astoria.

Draco does seem a bit OOC, yes, but that's what fanfiction is for, isn't it? I like how, even though he had relaxed his position about Muggle-borns, he still retains an air of superiority to people who don't do things the way he does them. Pansy is a perfect choice as a possible foil to Astoria, because she just doesn't understand the importance of teatime, and that's Draco's biggest pet peeve, it seems. :)

The funniest part, to me, was when Draco was making a big deal (in his head) about Pansy gulping down her tea. It really shouldn't be that big of an issue if you're a normal, forgiving person, but no, Draco Malfoy must see things in blacks and whites, and tea MUST be taken in a leisurely fashion. That part almost reminded me of the show Fawlty Towers (if you've ever heard of it) when Basil Fawlty makes mountains out of molehills about the things that his wife, Sybil, does to make him mad.

This story is going to be really cute and funny, I can tell! Good luck with writing the next chapter! :)

~UnluckyStar57

Author's Response: I wanted to write something different and Draco and Astoria don't seem to be written a lot so I thought I'd try my hand at it. And because I get a fuzzy feeling whenever I think about this story, it will mostly be just fluff and what will end up being my lame attempts at witty conversations.

Yeah, he is OOC but I just loved him so much that I couldn't bear to change him. I wanted to keep that holier-than-thou thing for Draco because, after all, once a Malfoy, always a Malfoy.

Everyone's got their pet peeves out there! It's like me and people chewing too loudly, or swallowing too loudly, or chewing with their mouths open. It just gets on my nerves so much. Draco just happens to have problems with people drinking their tea the wrong way.

I have never watched Fawlty Towers but that does indeed sound like Draco. Thanks for reviewing and for the feedback!


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