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Review:Illuminate says:
Hi! Review Tag!

I think your strongest skill is your characterisation- all of your characters are already fully formed in your head, along with all of their relationships with each other, and their thoughts and feelings about certain subjects seem organic and in keeping with their character. Your Slughorn was very believable and well characterised too :) As was your House Elf Selby :)

Your have a great sense of humour too! The idea of them doing Muggle drugs was quite funny and original, and looking at their effects on them was fun to read while still developing their characters.

I see that this is set during HBP, is that right? I'm very interested to see how the events of that book affect the characters, especially seeing as they're younger than the Trio and Draco etc :)

Great job!

Author's Response: Hi! :) Aw, you are so sweet for reading the first few chapters, I'm glad you had the chance to read more than just the prologue!

I'm glad you like the characterization, and you're right, I do have very complex ideas of the characters and their dynamics and personalities. I'm glad you noticed Slughorn, as I wanted to get the canon characters right, and the addition of the House Elf! :)

Ah, I'm glad you thought this was funny! I tend to do better with sad, angsty stuff, so hearing you were amused is just wonderful! I thought they were just being silly teenagers, and wanted to show how they can be ordinary as well.

Yes! The events do intersect them quite a bit, and Tor's realm of Hogwarts intersects on occasion with Harry's. I'm glad you enjoyed the story so far, thank you very much for a lovely review! :D


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