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Review:patronus_charm says:
Woo another chapter! Looking back on it, I kind of review bombed you and probably should have spread them out more instead of leaving them all over about three days :P

I feel bad liking the fact that Scorpius isnít best friends with Albus, because it would be a lot easier for both of them if they were. Iím among the guilty of making them best friends, but this wayís a lot more refreshing and cool.

I had a feeling that Lucy and Scorpius were going to kiss and Iím really glad that my predictions were right. I think it was the frequent mention of hands and palms because they featured quite a bit in the paragraphs leading up to the kiss, and thought it was a bit because not many people donít tend to focus on them so much. Then their stilted conversation beforehand was so awkward but cute ♥

Even though it was meant to be all romantic, I preferred your ending with Scorpius electrocuting Lucy with his hands as it was so him and fitted his adorable ways really well. Then he went and did a runner and left poor old Lucy just standing there. I canít wait to see how this continues, due to them being possible even more adorkable than Albus and Flora.

The resurrection stone appears then! Iím not going to make any theories about what it might do, because the ending of Welcome to Blunderland was something I never predicted so I feel as if whatever I may theorise will be wrong!

That last scene left me really confused about Albus though. I was so used to seeing him as the nice person through Floraís eyes, but not itís from Scorpius POV itís left me all confused. Gah deciding whether heís evil or not is so hard!

I loved this chapter ♥

-Kiana

Author's Response: No worries! Your reviews were wonderful - I mean, very flattering (I blushed a lot) but really insightful too! Thank you for being such a dear and leaving them ♥

Scorpius and Albus were never meant to have an easy friendship in this fic, despite my headcanon being that the two of them had the best bromance under the sun - but there's still a bit of time left in this fic, never fear!

Also, glad you liked the kiss scene! I really hate writing any sort of romantic bits in my stories and tend to avoid them like the plague, so I just sort of blitzed this one in one go and didn't go back to edit - good to hear it turned out okay then (well, in terms of reception, I don't think electrocuting a girl and doing a runner can count as a kiss that 'turned out okay').

Ahh, all shall be explained more in later chapters! I did some proper ~research~ (a.k.a I went on wikipedia) so I have an actual part science, part magic explanation for the way Scorpius is, but knowing me I'll forget about it and never actually write it into the fic. But chapter six goes a little way to explaining the resurrection stone part.

Baww! Don't worry, you're allowed to like Albus. Scorpius is just a conceited idiot. A Word From The Author: Albus isn't evil in the slightest - just a bit misguided, and suffering a little with his thoughts at this point in the story.

Thank you so much for reviewing! ♥


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