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Review:-BookDinosaur- says:
Hello Kiana! Here for the Ravenclaw Review Battle!

Such a sad piece-I was feeling so bad for poor Remus. You're right, it must have been such a horrible time for him. Two of his best friends had died, and he believed that one of his greatest friends betrayed him. And the him saying 'if he had been the Secret Keeper, or even Peter' was just so ironic.


I really liked your description in this one-shot, it all really emphasised the sombre atmosphere of the funeral.

I loved the line 'The last time those two were part of that procession it was in significantly happier times.' It really brought home the pain of their deaths and the fact they didn't live to see twenty-five. It was just so sad. :(

Anyway, all in all, this was a brilliant one-shot which really broke my heart.

Author's Response: Bam! This is going to be one of my speedest responses :P

I'm glad that you felt bad for Remus, because even though it isn't a nice feeling, it is the purpose ;) I'm glad that you agree with me, and it really makes me feel for him. I had to include the irony, because I think that's what makes the situation so bad, because if he knew he would at least have Sirius, albeit in Azkaban.

I'm really glad that you liked the description, as I tried to tie it in with the feeling of a funeral. Ah that's so tragic, everything's so tragic about this!

I'm so glad that you liked it, and I'm sorry that I broke your heart! Thanks for this great review ♥

-Kiana


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