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Review:Lululuna says:
Hello! :)

Once again, another great chapter! I love the way you write Brienne: your writing style is so eloquent and lovely in its simplicity, and it really brings her to life, both her outer calm and her inner grief and fear. I loved the descriptions of the feast, and the focus on the small details which make Hogwarts magical and special. The comparisons with Bri's former Halloweens were great as well.

I wonder where the twins were... perhaps looking for Sirius on the map? The integration of his slashing of the portrait was interesting as it shows how it would have affected another Gryffindor student not connected to Harry, as more of an inconvenience than anything.

The mentions of the cards is still very intruiging, and an interesting symbol of what's going on in Brienne's head. I'm excited to see where you'll take that metaphor, and how Bri's life at Hogwarts will continue to intersect- or not- with Harry's.

Good job, once again, and you are always welcome to re-request! :D

Author's Response: Hi!

Thank you so much for what you said about my writing style :) I like it to be simple and easy to read, so I'm glad that it is xD

The metaphor of the tarot cards is pretty important symbolism for the story as a whole xD I even used the word "Joker" in the title for its' connotations with the Joker of a deck of cards.

Thank you very much for your kind words and I'd love to rerequest :D


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